All Comments on 'Fourplay Plus One Ch. 01'

Love your stories. They sure stir me up. Can you please read and comment my stories and poems?

Really hot. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Adele may be able to turn Jeff and Alex around. if not she will still have many interesting experiences.

Ugh!! Can’t hold out till the next one!! That was hot!

really really good except for the occasional grammar errors. it felt like there was room in there for a little more description here and there. the sex scenes especially felt a little too short. i think if this had been 300 or so words longer it would be a 5 star story. as it is 4 stars is nothing to be ashamed of.

thank you for this and please keep writing.

Wow you are definitely back on form. Such a hot scenario and so lovingly written. I really enjoy that you can write different scenes even though I'm not sure how realistic the MM scenes are. Now on to part 2. Thanks xx

Hmmm, two males and a female, I remember now.

so loving, so hot