All Comments on 'Fourteen Days of Valentines'

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 4 years ago
Sorry!

I really enjoyed this sweet tale and tried to give it 5* but my clumsy finger hit the 4* on my phone. I was glad Beth finally saw through the wrong guy before it went too far and found the right one. Great job!

mcollectmcollectabout 4 years ago
Very well done

But I could see what was going to happen. Still a very good 5*. You have a good pace and it was well written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

enjoyed it, thanks!

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Well-paced slow moving love story. It took a while in the storyline but in the end, they found each other and that was an appropriate ending. Well done 5+++stars

joeoggijoeoggiover 1 year ago

Nice. Well done. Would have like more of Jeff’s backstory but otherwise great job.

LearnedMinx818LearnedMinx818over 1 year ago

You are my new favorite romance writer.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 1 year ago

Shyness may had hit hard if Rusty wouldn’t have been kind of overboard ….. but Jeff bought this Farm out of sight to be alone and do what he loves to do, so a monk is not a salesman ….. in the end happy end

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Finished all of 2019, reading in chronological order of posting. This was well done, too, with two minor annoyances: breathe has an e at tne end of the verb form versus the noun breath. Second, the past tense of lead (verb) is led, not lead again. Looking forward to the next 2020 story.

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