by garnetgirl
Wow really hot story! I like how you write not too fast and not too slow thank you!
"think about it for a second: If nobody cares about bad writing with poor grammar, nonexistent punctuation and more typo's than chocolate chips in a cookie, then why do people (like me) point them out?"
Probably because you're an anal-retentive jagoff...
Good story. So good, I wasn't a grammar nazi like the other fucktards. I don't care, it's a good story. They can go fuck themselves.
In fastany everything doesn't have to be so proper, Great Story can't wait for #2, please let us know what happens when the brother finds out?