All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 07'

The way you end the story at the end of the page of a chapter is freaking ingenious! It’s like a commercial break right at a pivotal point in the story! Then when you click on the next page, BAM, the story picks up right where the action left off on the prior page!it keeps the reader chomping at the bit for the next page! Hot damn you’re good!

I like the story line and I accept that it is fantasy. However, the tech errors detract from the effort. For instance, the native soldiers are portrayed as fighting with muskets and their navy is using wooden sailing ships. Yet, the hero is suddenly faced off with semi-auto pistols?