All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 10'

The admiral will go around the king's back using his junior officer. Hope Jack saves Kat from the slavers.

Love it

Except for a few minor issues, my hats off for an improved story. Thanks.

At least with this chapter I didn't have to skip through the amount of sex as in the previous chapter. This story doesn't need the sex, it can stand much better on the action.

a fun chapter. I hope Abigail's "can't sleep with your superior" is more fully fleshed out and we actually see some fallout from them being together. If not then it was basically pointless how she kept resisting and denying her feelings in the name of maintaining her crew's respect (although doesn't her public flirting with jack defeat the purpose of not being together?). Or maybe changing the reason she resisted to a fear of intimacy or bad past relationships(as alluded before).

I can't believe I am riveted even without the sex (well not entirely).

I couldn't help thinking that a man that served his king and country so well wouldn't receive some sort of accolade, like Knighthood or a Title (Duke , Earl), a plot of land with all the accoutrements (mansion, servants, fieldworkers).

Everything is fine! I just don't like the most common cliche when building a harem. when the first woman in the harem is the first to declare that she doesn't mind sharing a man with other women. this is a very weak move, 95% of the authors use it.

Even if the battle with the Swabians had lasted half a day they should have been able to see which way the slowest vessel known had sailed and catch it up.