All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 12'

Another great chapter. Thank you.

He just can not stop pissing off the locals. Time to invade the capital and take it over. Only way out after that set of runners go stir up the ants nests.

Slofred, your comment made me laugh, no joke! Yeah, Jack hasn't had good luck with getting along with many of the locals but it's made for some interesting scenarios. Things in Andalucia will be taking a dramatic turn next chapter. I hope you like where it goes and thank you for reading!

It couldn't hurt to be more technical.Why would they keep up automatic fire when they could save ammunition and accuracy using semi automatics suited against large overwhelming numbers.Also there are no other marine times like snipers,etc.

It is a very confronting story, but so true remembering what humans have done to each since time began. The battle scenes are very realistic having been in commando conflicts before retirement. I am sure that I will enjoy the rest of this story.