All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 13'

Can't wait to see what Jack does to Andulucia and how the conflict in Java resolves itself. Thank you

Dead upon Arrival should have been DRT Dead Right There. A rather resent military acronym Now back to the story. Love it by the way.

This story keeps getting better and better with each chapter. He now has a base of operations well within the Vector. The Admiral will have to send some ships to support his new nation.

5 stars again. Please keep the quality of this story even if it takes a bit of time to produce this level of story.

13 chapters and they keep getting better as they go. Keep them coming,I really enjoy reading the series

When it came to the part of the story when they all got down on one knee and bowed to Jack, I was screaming like a maniac up in here! I know my neighbors have probably already called our rental office to file a noise complaint against me!🤣 I regret nothing though because this story is damn good!

There seems to be something missing after the paragraph: "Give him more morphine. He's still with us," said the woman as she stepped away from the bed.

Analyzing HTML code, seems it's missing the beginning of the next paragraph, which should be something like: 'Yes. It's not so easy to kill Percival Bancroft,' he thought to himself. In the next moment, a rough hand grabbed his wrist, injecting the soothing liquid into his veins. A brief euphoria hit and then he was out again.

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Excellent story!