All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 23'

I've been consumed by this tale since I picked it up a week ago. I was just finishing 22 as 23 came online. Absolutely brilliant tale and cannot wait to read more.

Hmm a visitor for Jack from the Emperor ? Suspicious indeed.

Outstanding

Jack’s adopted sister?

Tanks on the evil side swings the battle. Our Heroes had to 'hightail it out of Dodge City'. Losing the battle ... is the war in jeopardy?

Jack was punching above his weight. Knocking out battle ships, left and right. Winning the battle .... is the war now assured?

Lots of dead friends and colleagues in both cases.

i love that we can keep finding gems in the mix of stories in this collective called Literotica, i have spent the last 3 days reading this series totally engrossed in the Java'n story, again WOW love this series, thank you and keep em coming please

Wonderful story but one very minor gripe. You keep using "striped", which describes tigers and zebras, rather than "stripped" the word you obviously intended.

Aw man... not Anna... I can just imagine how devastated Abigail will be... :(