All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 33'

Excellent timing on the baby. At least Jack didn't miss the birth of his child. I love this story. Being a 20 year navy vet, I love the fighting.

Another excellent chapter. It looks like all the parties are ready to go on the offensive. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

Never er mind the war we have a baby on the way.

Lol.

Cheers.

I love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. 5 stars again.

Another great chapter! Thanks!

Thanks for another great chapter to this legendary story

BRAVO!! More please!!!

Wow another home run. The best story on lit.

Lots of intrigue with many twists. Good to see Jack growing in wisdom and influence to discern and expose what the "Swabians" were up to. Not complaining, but not seeing much Sci-Fi in this story.

Want to hear more about the prophecy .... especially with the new arrival.

Another racket of a story

I hope they land troops elsewhere in apullia. It makes no sense to not have some goal of cutting supply lines or going after the tanks.

I assume there was galician embassy in samara. Interesting where their allegiance lies.

Hopefully carinthia can hold out with part of its army and ships gone.