All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 34'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

9 1/2 Stars: At this point in the story the chapters can't come fast enough. As this story has unraveled you have taken each thread and

woven them into one of the best epoch adventures ever. The score of 9 1/2 stars is only due to my impatience. Great work looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

We have the ground troops ready to follow their general, and probably most of the task force. However there are some new ships and captains their too.

That being said a combined javan and galacian navy should outnumber and surprise a swabian task force. Hopefully for devastating effect.

Now if they could just crank up some intelligence like with mainland galacia and others along with carpatia building planes and tanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This series is so damn good.

Taurus59Taurus59over 2 years ago

Excellent chapter. I am glad Jack is changing his name. The people will embrace the name much easier. Excellent battle scenes too.

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