All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 40'

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BruceWoBruceWoover 2 years ago

Another great chapter

ranec1ranec1over 2 years ago
Mean As!!

chur m8 awsum story

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zainbainzainbainover 2 years ago

I think that in the sentence:

"They fell upon the newly-created Allied defensive lines with a ferocity that couldn't be 𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿stated.",

the word you are looking for is 𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿stated rather than 𝘂𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿stated.

drycreeksdrycreeksover 2 years ago

Awesome Awesome Awesome keep up the great work it is appreciated and enjoyed.

radlas1984radlas1984over 2 years ago

Jesus Christ. This was a hard chapter to get through.

radlas1984radlas1984over 2 years ago

Depending on how this next chapter goes I may be going back through all previous chapters and changing my 5 stars to 1 stars and loudly and frequently recommending that no one read this series.

Real life is shitty and painful enough. I don't need this bullshit in my escapist hobby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hope this isn't too cliche but ... I really like Cash. 😂 What a character 🤣

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