All Comments on 'Frank Fucks His Aunt'

Bad spelllng side, this is one of the most unrealistic yarns i've read on this site. I must remember the authors alias as he's one to avoid henceforth.

This story had the making of a decent read, right up until the dildo & vibrator sent the whole thing into the dumpster. How old are you ? This is the underdeveloped fantasy of a pre-adolescent panty sniffer if I ever saw one. Go home, delete this and try again, and again, and again. Maybe it will get better, but make it at least some degree of realistic.

Cant even give this fucking garbage an ace,,, it far far from worth it

One day I was at home watching TV when I heard my mom, "Hey Frank your Aunt Eileen is just after ringing to tell me that John will be up at half seven for the sleep over," Calling from the kitchen as she was cleaning the dishes.

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1. "...your Aunt Eileen is just after ringing to..." makes no sense at all.

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2. Don't capitalize Calling. This is not the start of a new sentence or a proper noun. You do this throughout the story. At least once, you don't capitalize his name.

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I don’t expect professional level writing, but I do expect some evidence that the writer passed grammar school with at least a passing grade. There is no evidence of that in this mess.

This story is garbage, starting with the 21-year-old's "little" 18-year-old cousin. Did you mean 8 years old, or is that your age?

Hope the story continueswith the mom

Even though I gave you a 5 vote this was for the idea of the story,but for the grammar spelling etc etc it was just plain old crap !!!, get a proof reader other than you and an editor to help you as you bloody well need some sort of help in your efforts. Now I hope with heaps of improvements in the grammar and spelling that you continue with chapter two in which he fucks mum as well and hopefully he gets them both pregnant

There has to be at the very leaset a story line that could be accepted, even to a moron, as real.

This missed the mark, the idea of fiction is that the reader thinks it is real.

I got my aunt Rachel knocked up plus she gave me three kids we live together now since three boys are old enough they been fucking her too every day they gangbang her her cunt ass and mouth she screams when she orgasm then one day the boys put three cocks in her cunt yelled you three bastards ripping me apart told fuck slut good