All Comments on 'Frankie and Johnny'

by bjmichaels

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Excellent story until the end since it's all about the reciprocation. I felt like Johnny must have. Teased without anything to show for it. At least you could have given us Frankie blowing him.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 11 years ago

Some of your stories i like but this one..., too much manipulation. Im not gonna say that Johnny wouldn't have eventually chose that road but if Frankie was truly his best friend he wouldnt have set him up like that. Its almost like he forced this life on him. Did Frankie pay Bear to force himself on him and did he set up the whole 'threesome' thing to make him uncomfortable? Just too much.

shoeslayershoeslayerabout 11 years ago
WEIRD !

YUP, you took a song that goes way back

and anyone knowing that song is going to

say,"That is so 'WEIRD."

It went like this.

Frankie an Johny were lovers

Oh how they could love,

They swore to be true to each other

as true as the stars above

He was her man

But he was doing her wrong.

As I was told Frankie was a nickname for Frances

and Johny was doing her wrong.

BJMichaels, you are dong them both wrong

Auspat2121Auspat2121almost 3 years ago

Beautiful story thank you again.

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