All Comments on 'Fran's Escape'

With the secret already out, and her lack of discretion, I fear for the survival of their relationship.

One of the best story of this genre that I've read in a very long time. I absolutely loved this, well written and an excellent plot line. I've never read any of this author's work before, but this has given me an appetite.

Fantastic story - one of the best of its type that I've read in a long time. Very well written, and not just non stop fucking but a plot line you could believe. I've never read any of this author's work before, but it's given me an appetite.

Good work, but pull "Ma" together a bit please. There is quite a difference in being FREE and being LOOSE! Lls. ....

Now let's see how it all comes together <hint for more>, because as it stands she's going to maybe lose a really good thing allowing herself to fall in with this all out anything goes attitude! I'd really like to see Ty be a little more loving, affectionate, and yes, a lot more verbal in his feelings for Fran.

Finally, I thank you for staying away from the idiotic "mommy" drivel!!!

Thx for sharing a great tale n keep em cumming uuuh coming....... *joker grin *

Izzie

Far better than the usual cum bucket crap depicted in other stories.

Must have another chapter for this one, Please?

Is good and fine story of love between Fran and Ty, not the typically story of mother fucker. I see feelings in this story, not only lust. And the experience of Fran with her husband, is more normal, unfortunately, of what the people think, in the real life.

Waiting a new chapter of this story. There are still many things to say in this story.

5* for you!

Wow, that is incredible. Love to see them become a couple, maybe she inherits a small fortune from her parents enough that her and Ty can get a place over seas where he can get a good place and a good job for him and she can rub it in Lenny's face. When they're far away.

I liked this story though the start was incredibly slow and nearly made me lose interest. A good and easy read for the most part and virtually free of grammatical or spelling errors. Thanks.

Reading stories in the First Person are the best. With a romantic flavor and dialogues to match. The sex scenes were not over done.

I normally don't give fives, but this story, for me deserved it.

Thank you

JUST WAY TO SLOW MOVING, I LOST TRACK IT WAS A "SEX"

STORY,

I completely disagree with anonymous. The longer the story, the bigger the build up to the ultimate climax (yes, the pun was intended). I prefer stories with long exposition and full character decelopment. If Anonymous wants "Wham, Bam, Thank you, Ma'am," he should read scouries. To this story, I gave five stars and high praise to the writer.

I enjoyed that very much. Very hot and well written. Five stars and a favorite point.

5 stars needs another chapter to go with it to make it really good

Hope there is a part 2. 5 stars

Chapter 2 please. They move after he graduates to another part of the country and have a couple of kids. Daughter/Sister comes to visit with her babies

and gives her blessing...

Great job, one of the best I've read!

Please oh please write a sequel on Fran & Ty

Do they move? Have a kid? What? LOL

another chapter?

So sad that you never considered extending this.

Hope you are planning a part 2. 5 stars

Love it. Has to have a follow up chapter. AAAAAA+++++

I like that you give the Moms in your stories the pubic hair that mature women have.

Wish there was an epilogue it would have been 5 stars for me if there was. 4 stars