All Comments on 'Fraternising'

Interesting story, your writing style is really good the action and dialogue flowed naturally. I’d suggest you add Tags to your stories they serve an obvious dual purpose. One is to essentially advertise your story to potential readers with similar tastes as yours and the other is to act as Trigger Warnings to potential readers. Being brutally honest had I read tags for your story I’d have been unlikely to read it. Futa/ Futinari (freely admit I don’t know if there’s a difference) stories just aren’t my thing, obviously there’s nothing wrong with it as a kink but as a woman I prefer to read stories that I can imagine myself being on the receiving end of the action.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)