All Comments on 'Fraternization'

by john_sixfooter

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BestOfAllWorldsBestOfAllWorldsover 3 years ago
Hold Up.

Good story, but the end slams into a wall without warning.

I personally think that a little pontificating on the situation would have been nice, but it's not my story, I know.

fausttusfausttusover 3 years ago

FUBAR.....not sure where to begin with this mess.

Is English your second language?

And the military details, close but some is just a bit off.

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