by MarshalMarmont1815
stopped reading once the gay sex started...you should have said it was gays
Some sort of character introduction would have made this a whole lot easier to understand. No plot doesn't help either. Just a lot of sex happening with a bunch of random people.
I agree, terrible story, it's seems to have been written by a horny little boy that has had no formal writing training. There could have both scene and character set up.
I disagree. Loved it. Set up isn't necessary, jump right in to pure smut. I don't need three paragraphs of background on these people's story. That's not why I'm on this site. A few more hints on who is who would help me think even less and get right to the point.
To the person whining about the gays, this story has bisexual in the tags. Naturally, that means gay sex on both ends
I do love a story with a lot of fucking and sucking, but a little character intro would help. Especially knowing the relationship is, whether family, friend or just a random Fuck. Like others have said, it doesn't need endless paragraphs of setup just some intro. Please rewrite this added in some intros.
The story was tolerable until the point where a five-year-old boy is supposed to have properly ejaculated… that’s not just sick, it’s also totally absurd.