All Comments on 'Freaky Family Fucking'

by MarshalMarmont1815

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WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

Stupid, mindless story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Pathetic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well that happened

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Garbage!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

stopped reading once the gay sex started...you should have said it was gays

rem556rem556about 3 years ago
Characters

Some sort of character introduction would have made this a whole lot easier to understand. No plot doesn't help either. Just a lot of sex happening with a bunch of random people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree, terrible story, it's seems to have been written by a horny little boy that has had no formal writing training. There could have both scene and character set up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I disagree. Loved it. Set up isn't necessary, jump right in to pure smut. I don't need three paragraphs of background on these people's story. That's not why I'm on this site. A few more hints on who is who would help me think even less and get right to the point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

To the person whining about the gays, this story has bisexual in the tags. Naturally, that means gay sex on both ends

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I do love a story with a lot of fucking and sucking, but a little character intro would help. Especially knowing the relationship is, whether family, friend or just a random Fuck. Like others have said, it doesn't need endless paragraphs of setup just some intro. Please rewrite this added in some intros.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story was tolerable until the point where a five-year-old boy is supposed to have properly ejaculated… that’s not just sick, it’s also totally absurd.

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