All Comments on 'Fred's Night Out'

by Frogsoup

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SithspitSithspitover 15 years ago
Very well written story!

Good plot, good dialogue, good grammar and spelling, likable characters with great sex.

Merry Christmas indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
'Peaky'! Love the word.

I love that Emma's nipples were 'peaky' from the cold. That's elegant.

Kris42Kris42over 15 years ago
One of the best i have read...

This story was truly amazing, it had the sexual tension, the lust, the passion the lust...wow i just hope you have more of Frank and Emma to come because these characters are fantastic. More please Frogsoup....and keep up the good work! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very good writing

Hi Froggie -

your characterization of need and lust is wonderful, but as a married woman, I cannot help but mourn the loss of vows. A real marriage would, hopefully, take longer to dissolve.

Otherwise, nice story, nice arousal, nice lovemaking. :kiss:

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 8 years ago
Fred is Smart!

Emma Showed His Wife could Not be in Cleveland; Then Gave Him a New Life! Exciting Story!

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