by wizardwriter
the build-up is extraordinarily well-done, if my opinion counts in these.. i don't think i recall more than 5 stories that got me to want to be present at the site of the story.. well done :)
I agree. This story is a fantastic start. I do hope you will continue this story line. I imgaine the ramping up will be great.
That was awesome, the way you described the characters, set the plot & scenes were just perfect. I assume you must be a proffessional author but if you aren't you should be!
OK off to read your other story now I hope it's as good if not better than this one. Keep up the good work & post more stories
Damn that was a hot story. Made me cum hard after reading it. Please continue with another chapter