All Comments on 'Free at Last Ch. 01'

by Gweall

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wow

That nurse should lose her license. The way she acting isn't ethical at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great Story

Thanks for writing, Very much enjoyed reading. I am looking forward to Chapter 2. I did not feel that it was a dark as you said the the start of the story. I do feel we should talk about suicide more and not hide it away.

nanobotnanobotabout 9 years ago
keep writing

You tell a compelling tale.

MechanicaMechanicaabout 9 years ago
Heartfelt

Love it! This is a very nice start. I love Ana^^

Looking forward to what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
love your story

please don't kill Ana :(

kmillerk1kmillerk1about 9 years ago
good story

You made me cry. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Seems I have read this before

Have u published this before. I will keep reading

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I'm trying my best...

Not to care about Ana. And I am failing. And on top of that, i've felt like Nicolai. That dark hopelessness and fear that you will never be okay. I feel silly, because even though they're not real, I connect with these characters. You have written it that well. So no matter where it goes in the end, Thank You for this Wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
love it

Plz dont kill ana😒😒😭😭, and good work

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