- Loving Wives
- Free Ch. 04
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In case you don't remember who Manchester Childs is, he was arrested two years ago for drug drafficking, racketeering, extortion, assault, various weapons charges, and the murder of his own cousin, Donald Childs. His court case went on for nearly nine months until he suddenly changed his plea from not guilty to guilty. Insiders say that he accepted a plea deal from the DA because he was ready to provide evidence against his supplier in exchange for a more lenient sentence.
No one had seen or heard from Mr. Childs in nearly a year. It was assumed that he was under police protection.
Investigators haven't disclosed whether or not they suspect inside involvement from the police in his death. However, they haven't ruled out that possibility either.
Records show that Mr. Childs' empire brought in as much as 3 to 4 million dollars a week. He is the second youngest kingpin on record.
He leaves behind no next of kin.
The investigation is still ongoing. We will update you when more information is made available.
On to other news, FuFu, the famous panda, has finally given birth...
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Notes from author:
I want to thank you all for reading. It truly means a lot to me, and probably every author on this site, to have people read and comment on the stories. I love all the comments, even the ones telling me I'm the shittiest writer to ever start hacking away at my laptop. The purpose of writing these stories is for people to read them. So, thank you for spending time with me.
I also wanted to thank you guys for the supportive emails that you've sent me, despite me being a virtual stranger to all of you. Some of you may be aware that I had to take some time off to deal with personal things. I took time off work, time away from some people in my real life; everything. The emails that I got meant a lot to me. In fact, I may not have finished this story if I hadn't gotten them.
If you enjoy an author's work, be sure to tell them about it. You never know how much your encouraging words could mean. It could encourage him or her to put out another story, or just make them feel the time spent on the last one was worth it. I'm not one to get hung up on positive or negative comments on my stories, but this was a dark time for me. Now, more than ever, I realized how touching it is for something as simple as a "Thank you for sharing your talent" comment can be.
Once again, thank you all!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoToo bad he left prison just to end up with a hoe!!! I guess life isn't all happy endings
leofric35about 1 month agoLoved it now marked as a favourite. The character development was great and the story flowed, pulling me to make sure I read it in one go. Thanks for the work you put into it.
LT56linebackerabout 2 months agoFANTASTIC FUCKING STIRY!!! To paraphrase 'Buster2U' 10 Blazing big stars. If I could give more, I would. But I can't afford it. The Bear loved it. It has become one of my favorite stories. I kept waiting for some shit to happen and spoil everything. Sorry, but this is 'Loving Wives', and crap happens to the good guys. And Rick and Traci are good guys. Not perfect, human. I love them. They are so good. And the way they wound up, is just perfect. And the mother-in-law- definitely not the textbook mother-in-law. Great character development. All in all, a great story, and as I said, one of my favorites. Please, keep writing. Don't worry about personal shit- we all have them. Sometimes I wonder how I get out of bed in the morning (Or in the afternoon. I am retired.) hang in there. Again, LOVED IT!!
The BEAR
Ambivalence3 months agoPardon vs parole.
Pardon, you're done, it's great like you completed all of your sentence.
Parole, you're let out of prison early but still need to behave and deal with a parole officer.
crazymike453 months agoGreat story. I couldn't stop still I finished it. Some spelling and grammar errors but this is an amateur site, right? Easy to read flow. Good Job!
cyendrey7 months agoThis was a great story! It started out along an almost rxpected scenario then turned into something else entirely. Keep it up!
Anonymous9 months agoLOVED the gangsta shit. Made me think of the show 'Power'
Great story. I hope you keep writing.
My thoughts are that Traic wasn't a ride or die chick. She was cool with Rob when she was spending his money but the moment he went down she started fucking another man for the flimsiest of reasons. If she was lonely she could have spent time with another man without fucking him. Instead, she chose to fuck another man for years. Although Manny was a psychopath incapable of intimacy and love, Traci must have formed an emotional attachment to him betraying Rob on every single level possible. Seeing and interacting with someone frequently creates a bond, fucking that person hundreds of times while her husband was suffering in prison must have caused her to have feelings for him. She did him dirty, and he shouldn't have taken her back.
Anonymous10 months agoA truly fine story. Unlike most of what we see here, this story is insightful, mature, and well executed. I do wish authors would write parents who are more thoughtful than to use video, and especially Disney, as a babysitter.
oldtwit10 months agoA great story, nicely thought out, paced at , to my mind, the right pace from start to finish, character set chosen well, more sex? To my mind yes, but you wrote it.
JimmyThePlunger11 months agoExcellent, thank you. It's an interesting dilemma, wife seeks cock whilst husband is serving a long sentence. Whe you think about it, it really must happen more often than not. Women married to dubious characters are unlikely to take on the persona of a nun when their mate is incarcerated. I suppose many carerr crims either knock the wife about and leave her or accept it as just another occupational hazard , just like years behind bars.
rustynail9512 months agoIt isn’t explicitly said, but these characters, with the exception of the parole officer are Black. Unfortunately, Black people are portrayed badly in most literature and drama. They are flat characters. Either good or evil, but have a one dimensionality that is almost comical. The author doesn’t do that here. He paints a very real picture of people with complex motives and desires caught in an impossible web of poverty and criminality. I am not Black, but I grew up in an intercity neighborhood that was mostly Black. I came to understand Black people were pretty much like white folks. They just had the burdens of poverty, prejudice, and the legacy of slavery on their shoulders. This story was exceptionally well written. Javmor79 is a superb writer. One of the best on this site. An easy five stars.
Bri2912 months agoI just discovered your work and ate this whole story up in an evening I was oblivious to the outside world much to my wife's displeasure.I don't agree with Tracy's reasoning in being unfaithful but your the writer and you need to have it in the story to make it interesting ,and you did a good job of explaining her thinking even if I don't agree with it .Fantastic story I absolutely loved it I think your right up there as one of my favourite authors now .Well done 5⭐️👌👍
