by blackstroker
Your plot /theme is exactly the same as in your story "Dark Heat". That shows a lack of imagination or just plain laziness and I think you can be much better. I love black mother/son incest stories and hope that you get better with time.
For the most part I enjoyed it n it made me cum! I would of liked For it to be more fuckin but it did its purpose n came good. ;)
I really liked it I should hope u turn this into a series of sorts I think it of when they go to the us and how they relationship grow and develop keep up the good work
It's pleasant thinking about the different terms guys use for the wonderful hairy hole between their mother's legs. Examples: The hole I came out of. My own mother's cunt. Mom's clasping cunt. My mother's mommy-hole. The paradise between my mother's legs. My mommy's twat. My own mother's warm wet ever-loving twat. Mom's semen catcher. The gifted author's come up with a new one. Her maternal gully. A valuable addition to the lexicon.