All Comments on 'Free Spirit'

by blackstroker

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washdog10washdog10over 10 years ago
Diversify Your Themes

Your plot /theme is exactly the same as in your story "Dark Heat". That shows a lack of imagination or just plain laziness and I think you can be much better. I love black mother/son incest stories and hope that you get better with time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I enjoyed it!

For the most part I enjoyed it n it made me cum! I would of liked For it to be more fuckin but it did its purpose n came good. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Anonymous

MORE!!!!! Don't just leave us like that!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great

I really liked it I should hope u turn this into a series of sorts I think it of when they go to the us and how they relationship grow and develop keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
exciting, and very well-written

It's pleasant thinking about the different terms guys use for the wonderful hairy hole between their mother's legs. Examples: The hole I came out of. My own mother's cunt. Mom's clasping cunt. My mother's mommy-hole. The paradise between my mother's legs. My mommy's twat. My own mother's warm wet ever-loving twat. Mom's semen catcher. The gifted author's come up with a new one. Her maternal gully. A valuable addition to the lexicon.

chytownchytownalmost 6 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

DADDYLOVER2DADDYLOVER2almost 5 years ago
Mom NEED MORE

YOU REALL TOOK CARE OF YOU MOM MORE THAN SHE REALIZED!

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