All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 11'

I enjoyed Connie's confession about her sex with Tommy. Fran surprised me even more than I had anticipated. I expected her intelligence and drive would be a special "test" of the potion, but I didn't expect the "need to marry" bit. Very well written dialogue between James and Fran. I loved Fran's reply when James said he had been married to Wendy for 20 years - "So now it's my turn" ... great fun writing on that!! I was a bit put off by the prostitute sex - just my personal hangup about prostitutes and the greater chance of both sexual diseases and the all-too-frequent muggings that result from what I've read over the years. I did enjoy the parts of the scene in which Gina was overcome by the potion's effects and the sex became more personal than professional. James' decision to tell Fran about the potion ... well ... I don't see it working. But I look forward to part 12, which will hopefully cover that area.