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Click here"Kyle, ugh. You're mouth feels so good on me." At my words of encouragement he started to really go down on me. He used his mouth and throat to fuck my dick. He must have felt me getting close because he brought up one of his big, calloused hands to stroke my shaft while he worked my head and part of the shaft with his mouth. It felt like heaven. He'd kept eye contact with me from the beginning but now he closed his eyes, a look of sublime enjoyment on his face. Knowing that he was getting off on sucking my cock brought me to orgasm.
"Oh shit, baby. I'm coming." He never backed off and brought me over the top, swallowing my load. It was the best head I'd ever gotten and I slumped back onto the mattress.
"Get some rest, Tony. You have to be exhausted from the change. Just take a nap. I've got some stuff to do, but I'm not leaving and I'll be right here when you wake up." He kissed me tenderly, I could taste my come on his lips, and rolled me to the center of the bed.
I was exhausted, more than I thought possible, and let him position me. "Kyle, I love you." I whispered before I fell completely into darkness.
I fully agree with everything illwind said. Kyle is obnoxious and Tony apologises? This story is abusive.
I agree with illwind. Kyle is controlling, abusive, and very inconsiderate. I dont like him at all
So just so I understand the events as they happened: Kyle invites his whole pack over to Tony's house without so much as a "hey, my friends are coming over." Then instead of introducing him to said friends, he tells Tony to go wash up. And when Tony dares to disagree with that plan, Kyle kicks in his door and punches him in the face. And suddenly Tony is the one apologizing? Suddenly Tony has no right be be defensive or angry in his own home when there are eight uninvited strangers in it? How dare he expect an explanation or introduction, no he should just do what he's told. Oh, but it's okay, because Kyle also drove his car without asking him. That might actually be the craziest shit I've ever read.
And their talk at the end was just as ridiculous. Tony is telling him exactly how he feels and Kyle is just dismissing those feelings because he knows Tony 'liked it.' He's all but saying he's going to keep treating him like a sub because he thinks he knows better what Tony wants than Tony himself does. Oh yeah, I'm sure with an attitude like that they'll be 'equals.'
The first chapter did an excellent job of drawing me in and the second chapter did an even better job of pushing me right back out.
Sexual terms that work in the bedroom are negotiated between the partners. In consensual sex, there is no Right or Wrong or PC dictionary. What works for them is the issue, not what works for the reader in his own situation. Kyle and Tony need to find their own satisfying scheme. And what works one time might not work another. It's called variation.
Much of what is driving the story here is dominance, 2 strong individuals, crashing along. When you are a were-tiger, then you make the rules- at your house, but thank you, not at mine.
But! (There is almost always a but) I agree with the others, it gets in the way of the hot scene when he calls his ass a pussy/cunt/etc. We're reading in the gay section for a reason. Also, how often they call eachother baby is starting to get a tad annoying. Nontheless, the story is hot and well written. Good job.
i thought it was good how you did tony's anger......but again with the other comments, Kyle better not call cunt or pussy again, tony is no woman and since i am happily in the gay section i wouldn't want him to be.......also, what the fuck is with calling woman fishes? i don't like being called a fish and if you would like to be skinned and gutted like a fish, by all means Keep Talking dumbass
on a better note, lovely story toddstop and everything else seems delicious
Stop calling a man's sex a cunt or pussy!!!! Extremely degrading for men and women!
This story is too good to add negativity in it.
I'm so glad they had that confrontation. I guess it was just sex talk, but it pisses me off for a number of reasons when a man's asshole is referred to as his cunt or pussy. It's meant to degrade the man and it indicates a lack of respect for women in general. It's totally realistic that Tony would have issues over the fact that 1) there wasn't a clear discussion about mating and whether he wanted it, 2) Kyle gave no hint that his dominant/rude behavior was not a total reflection of his attitude toward Tony, 3) he had invited people into the house without Tony's permission, and 4) Brady behaved like a jerk. I thought the author handled the tension for both characters well.
Wow! Sumone married a shrew like you? There is hope for d world yet. Women aren't fishes you arse!
Dharmie.