All Comments on 'Free Wolf Ch. 04'

You're really getting good at this. Are you sure it's your first story? LOL. It's incredible...keep up the good work!

That scene when Tony was asking Kyle how many partners....that reminded me of the movie, Mr & Mrs Smith.....that was funny!! I was smiling the whole time...really cool stuff!!

So, he's a Siberian, huh? Totally cool! I agree with Kyle, Siberians are beautiful and graceful creatures not to mention pretty fierce.

Thanks and Cheers!! (:

I am also impressed this is ur first story.I am surprised Tony didn't mark him with a

bite givEn he wanted to. I assume Kyle will take on his scent now. It was nice how the pack reacted to him. Will Tony have a higher position in the pack? Lookin forward to next chapter.

Aww I thought you would have them mate in their were-forms, especially as Tony was topping and all, you know big cat on small wolf...great writing though. Hope there's more where that came from!

Ah yes, totally worth the wait. Love that Kyle got a little of the barbed action. Maybe he won't be so cocky now. <grin> Truly love that they're going to be closer to equals and that you're not merely making Tony into a "pussy" boy. Forgive my terrible pun. Great story!

So many questions!! I loved this chapter! And that hunting scene was out of this world! Hot, hot, hot. Jeez, can't wait for the next chapter.

Trust Posh to wish they had mated in their were form. I must confess i was wishing that too. Great story Todd. Hi wicked- hi nomoretears - and my sweet posh. Luv u guys.

very funny

This is an amazingly HOT story! Love it! I'm a straight (though curious) woman and this has me soo horny and wet! Keep writing more!

I think the best part was that Kyle really enjoyed being on the receiving end, that you didn't just let him 'endure' it for the same of Tony. Having him love it and want more was so hot. Five stars without a doubt.

I like that this relationship has an equal feeling to it along with the dom/sub thing. Even though Kyle was concerned about the pain, he wanted to join with his mate in this way. It was interesting, and perhaps realistic, that he was worried about the pain to him, but wasn't always concerned about the pain he caused Tony. (He said he didn't want to cause Tony pain, but he did it anyway. "Any time, any place" was okay for Kyle but not for Tony. Again, probably realistic for an Alpha male/bully. I love the story and the world. Well written.