All Comments on 'Freedom Ch. 01'

Excellent and thanks

Condoms wont sticking up the writers ass

It's the philosopher's stone she leaves at the end: "I am a slave, a slave of my own sick mind and my desires . . . a puppet in the hands of the lust and nothing else..."

It goes to show, every one of us has an addiction to something.

Why is he her brother but called dada, is this is stolen/changed daughter dad incest that just someone changed? Or is this some Mid East pet name thing?

In some of the Indian languages, elder brother is called 'Dada'

Hope you will follow up with another Chapter.

The older brother is Indian -- give him a sexy hairy chest, a softly haired manly chest for her boobs to rest against!

I hated the ending. I must not be the only one who feels like that and it shows in the ratings because you’re below 4.0. If you hadn’t been all about just the lust and incest, you would have been rated higher. The brother uses the sister then just leaves her. Horrible! You wrote this 9 years ago and never wrote anything else. I'll consider that a blessing. 🙏 3/5