All Comments on 'Freedom Comes at a Price Pt. 02'

I enjoy you're writing, just wish there was a little more detail to the storylines! It's very steamy, and colorful without being obvious and overly graphic. In both chapters I was hoping for a little more dialogue between the two free Beth becomes more comfortable with Daniel's home. They fall into sex quite easily, but later on I thought you could allow them to get to know each other more as people. It came in hints and later conversation with others so I feel like you were taking it into account, but I'm being a bit picky. Wonderful job

Best story I've read on here. It would be a wonderful full length novel.

Beautiful!!

More of Beth & Daniel, please!

You should really make mention that Beth is on birth control, that she's not ovulating or that Daniel uses condoms, because otherwise, she would definitely be pregnant.