All Comments on 'French Isn't Just For Kissing'

That was a fucking hot story. Wish I'd had a teacher like that. You have lots more to write for us - how about what the coach got up to, or what happened when the boys brought friends home from college. maybe they fucked her 3 or 4 cocks at a time. Tell us how Teach felt with a cock in the ass, two in the pussy and one in the mouth.

The story was great, but an abrupt ending.

Ended too quickly.

Also:

"how many times per week single women masturbate. His finger was on the statistic (which, in case you were wondering, was 92%"

Hmmm....not quite right methinks...but then again, I'm just nitpicking and wondering what the real stat was meant to be :D

I understand about the abrupt ending. I've been there. You told the tale you wanted and you just needed to wrap it up quickly. I get that. It was a very good tale. The pacing was very good until the last few paragraphs.

Please consider continuing this story or creating a new series using these characters. I was a little surprised the boys didn't suggest an orgy, considering they had a female teacher and just down the hall there was a male teacher with two female students.

The writing was very good. Let me know if you need an editor. I'm a volunteer editor for Lit and would be happy to help.

Keep writing!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxmrKav8gUM

"Did what?"

"Written a song."

"Will I know it when I hear it?"

"I'll give you a special signal."

I'm not responding to what I'm reading here. But I AM.

"James, we've written a song..."

"Will I recognize it?"

"You'll know it when it happens."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XxmrKav8gUM

Be glad poets and ADHD humans exist.

"What I was hoping for."