All Comments on 'Frenemies Learn to Share'

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Excellent story, good character development, and the descriptions were very good. There were a few spelling/grammar errors, but nothing too distracting. I would recommend a proofreader/editor for the next chapter. That's a role I'm happy to volunteer for, hmu here or on FetLife (Sensei Kevin). Looking forward to reading it whenever you're ready!