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All Comments on 'Freshman Bride Pt. 05 - Getaway'

by AmeliaZay

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A couple of passages that didn't get identified in either the proof read or the edit. I din't think further explanation is warranted:

"I looked up at me from behind my clit and started to eat me out."

". . . Holding each other close till" drifting off to sleep.

A few areas drift on without required punctuation. This is tremendously better than earlier chapters. I especially appreciate that they lay together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love where this story is going!!! Xxx

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