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by AmeliaZay

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freyafertilityfreyafertilityover 2 years ago

I love these stories. So hot. And really, my fantasy is to be Amelia.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Run on sentences can be edited with punctuation. I will not look it up but, in one, the character changed. And that was without punctuation!

Pleadr, please, please, find an editor.

Your story is terrifically strong; bring the quality of the writing up to match the quality you are trying to impart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Every cd want this, thank you for giving it to us x

Anthony1965Anthony1965over 2 years ago

So hot! I absolutely love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved every chapter of this story, please never end it xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Still waiting on the nexxxxxt

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Gender Fluid but technically Male but they don't have Gender Fluid as an option. New to crossdressing but excited married to a supportive woman looking to someday be a girl for a real man. If you are reading this I am not looking for someone to have a threesome with. Or ta...