All Comments on 'Freshman Ch. 01: He Loves Me'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Perfect buildup

The thing that I appreciate the most about this series is the patience and precision you use for the buildup. This wasn’t my favorite Rachel story, but I know that the fall is that much farther and more satisfying if she’s doing well before. Just good writing also. Which is such a rare thing in erotica. So thank you!

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Good chapter

Sorry for the generic comment, but just wanted to say I really liked this chapter! The title for the next one sounds promising as well!

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Thanks to all who read and provide me with the encouragement to continue this strange little endeavor I've stumbled into. I have four series out currently and I'd highly recommend reading them in the following order (which follows their chronological release dates): Prom Pr...

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