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All Comments on 'Freshman Week Ch. 02: Roommates'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice Build Up, But...

The very end "she had pale skin, green, and a short head of blonde hair..." What's green? Had to re-read your first story to realize it was green eyes.

centralsquareguycentralsquareguyabout 5 years ago
Great Coming of Age Story

Who doesn't like college roommates?

Rwa4768Rwa4768about 5 years ago
Great story

I can't wait for these two girls to start making love to each.other. More please.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Yeah, I dropped you down to 3 this time. I really should have given you a 3 on the previous chapter. It wasn't because there wasn't really any heavy sex in this one. I lowered your score primarily because of the silly ass mistakes that could easily be avoided by some good proofreading.

Also, Asian women, generally speaking, are not going to have huge breasts. So I found Rebecca slightly implausible as well.

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