All Comments on 'Freshman Week Ch. 05.0: Homesick'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

I have mixed feelings about the ending. 😕 I would have liked to see Adam and Natalie emotionally connected to such an extent that whenever they have sex, then it's making love and not just a fuck. I also don't want Natalie to explore any options in the daddy-daughter category either. That would ruin things for me big time. 5/5 but I came close to voting a 4.

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It is my goal, first and foremost, to write heartwarming smut the whole family can enjoy. With long, long gaps between updates. Enjoy my perversions! My rules for writing erotica: 1. Add something extra. Make your story funny, or heartwarming, or extremely weird. People will ...