by motherfucker2020
Very nice story. Shows realistic feelings and emotions. Very good descriptions.
I enjoyed your story, a little wine, and a lot of loving, between mother and son. I am wondering, if this is the end of the story, or if there is going to be more.
A very nice well written story that is sweet and erotic. I hope that the author tells the rest of the story.
A rainy day with a lot of wine with the woman that he loves could wind up being a day that they would never forget.
I hope that he works real hard getting his mom back in bed and into her pussy.
Loved the read, thanks
A great first story. A slow build up that doesn't erupt into a stupid porn fest but something altogether more erotic.
I look forward to your future contributions.
This is good as a stand alone, but could also very nice beggining to a more fully developed tale.
I hope a second chapter is already in the works.
Thanks for the great read!
Fantastic story. Is there any truth to it, it sounds so real. There is nothing better then a young boy screwing his own mothers pussy! Then to shoot his load of sperm deep inside mom's womb. French kissing mom is so sensual. I know how you feel in this story because I screwed my own mother when I was 18. I love my mom dealy and planting my sperm/seed in her pussy was the greatest moment of my life. I get instantly hard every time mom and I french kiss. Thanks for the story.
as a newcomer you did a great job in this mother son story. keep writing this and continue this series, including some anal and perversion also between mom son. mother son story is the heart of literotica. we wait for your next.......must be mom son.
You have written the best mother/son incest story I have read so far, and there are any number of good ones here. I like the slow buildup and the fantastic climax as the story ended. Hope there is a follow-up.
u really are a talented writer, i enjoyed the story very much ,and also i read all of ur stories they are all good
The mother read like she wanted someone to love her. It could have been any man and it was good reading.
Very good story not normally into the mother/son stuff but u made things realistic and vivid thanx for the good read can't wait to real more from you
It took a couple minutes of thinking about Susan Boyle and Rosie O'Donnell to kill my boner...20 seconds thinking of Nosie O'Donnell would kill a boner on my horniest day!
I still love this story, and it always brings relief of a night while I sit in a lonely hotel room.
But, it was drawn out and almost sexless.
I think there should be more,
after they get back home, We know dads fucking around,
dump him and start anew.
Mother and Son, that's the way to go Nice read. THANKS
In my opinion the verbiage was realistic, very realistic and reflected mutual respect between the mother and son. It was so much more than crude fucking. It reflected a genuine love between two lonely people.
rambling in the beginning. If you dropped the first page it would be 100% better.
3*
This is a great story. All the better for the build up, the well written realistic prose, the natural believable dialogue, the humour. It's the context, the tension, the supressed desire, the anxiety, the taboo, the trepidation that makes the sex work. Look forward to reading more.
Not sexy and why would you use actual people as boner killer examples? The conversations are stunted. Nope, didn't feel it
Enjoyed your story, which is realistic with true emotions. Please continue. Thank you.
As an avid reader of mother/son mutually consensual incestuous love stories, the ia an excellent story, for a short one. I enjoy psychologically and emotionally mature characters. As in real life, the lovers risk everything if they make the wrong decision; if one rejects the other; and/or If one miscommunicates/interprets a single action incorrectly. 18+ years can be trashed. On the other hand, to accept each other as equals, to wit: mature, sexual beings who truly love and care about each other uncondditionally, they onky have the workld to gain. Does the risk out weight the rewards? 5 star story.