All Comments on 'Friday Night Dinner'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Insanely hot!

This story is so good, so well written and paced, reading it felt like being there! Such a pity it is so short! Thank you very much!!

dezzirabledezzirablealmost 4 years ago
Awesome

Loved the details

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 4 years ago

Is there another chapter cumming??

ken0001ken0001almost 4 years ago
My compliments!

Loved this story and like all good stories I want a another chapter..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Started out good.

Story started well, fairly realistic and credible but went completely off the rails with Maya eating cum from mother's pussy and then the anal. Seems like you were trying to get a little bit of everything into your story, totally unnecessary and spoiled the whole thing.

EnjoyBothEnjoyBothalmost 4 years ago
Lusciously Erotic

Loved it. Of course, like the prior comment, deliciously short. But, of course, now we are looking for more!

live4thebjlive4thebjalmost 4 years ago
Not bad

I enjoyed it. ***

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
nice until the anal

3 stars is it for any anal...

itscalledhazingitscalledhazingalmost 4 years ago

Just wanted to add my advice to you that maybe you could break up your paragraphs? Some of them are so long that I didn't read it all properly. Each time you have someone say something new then its a new paragraph, it'll make reading the story a lot easier, though maybe it's just me

Also minor point, there wasn't much build up. Except for being drunk there's no reason for the mum to want to fuck her kids, maybe say you were drinking an unlicensed drink from some unknown country

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago
First time

should be pussy and no anal and no FF action. 3*

shang40shang40about 3 years ago

Such a hot incest. Fucking mom and then sis enjoy the mix cum and later offers her tight ass to bro. Next day mom will be giving her matured ass to son.

Moms are always special ass Queen

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

I agree with the other comments about anal the story would be better without it. Now getting sister pregnant would have been a better story line and even making mom in her early 40s having her get knocked up too. At any rate, I like the story 4++stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think story line was great. Anal was added surprise

Keep up the good work.

finegoldwinefinegoldwineover 2 years ago

Great Story..Hot 🔥 🥞 ♨️ 🥵 5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Nothing like getting right to the sex and forget the buildup and foreplay. When Maya was getting fucked in the ass, I found it kind of hard to imagine that Mom was able to get her tongue anywhere close to Dave's shit coated dick to lube it. Maybe that's your ides of a good time, but I think I'll pass. The rest was okay.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 1 year ago

That was one heck of a good story.

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