All Comments on '"Friend with Benefits" with My Mom'

by motherfucker2020

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JBinGAJBinGAover 5 years ago

Great story, well written and a bit different. It begs for a follow up where their activities expand to include oral, erotic lovemaking, even a threesome. Again, an excellent effort, and thank you for the read! :)

rodavrodavover 5 years ago
Very excting

I gave you 5 stars.

Very exciting and very loving sex between a mother and her son.

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago

He needs to breed his mom

rodavrodavover 5 years ago
Very loving

That was a very exciting and loving sex between a mother and her son.

5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot as fuck

Well written and delivered. Damn made me want to fuck his mom.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
fantastic!

great story. loved the style, the 2 POV's. brilliant. i hope theres more

Omart57Omart57over 5 years ago
Loved it!

Great style of story telling! I too, would like to see a part two. Would be great to see mom breaking her own rules , to hear her asking for more of this or that, even asking Jack to breed her! Great story!

boatbummboatbummover 5 years ago
Lovely

Mom better get on birth control PDQ! ;-) And maybe it's time for Jack to move back home. I mean, keeping up two dwellings seems like such a waste of $$$ if they're gonna be a full time FWB couple.

Thanks for this delightful tale of m/s love....

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
why write this?

Why not just jerk off to an ashkey fires video?

tallman441tallman441over 5 years ago

Good story. The reader can feel the emotion of the characters. The his and her narration covered all the angles. Look forward to reading more.

boaman007boaman007over 5 years ago
I agree

Great story. Wonderful writing style. More, please I would love to see mom's limits pushed perhaps a vacation spot where they could enjoy some PDA?

onlyfictiononlyfictionover 5 years ago
An interesting attempt. Mixed results

I applaud your experimentation with this style. It works pretty well for the most part. I found myself struggling to stay in the story by a combination of two things. (1) the frequency of the narrative shift. Changing who was talking threw me out of the narrative, and that's not a big deal if the shifts are few and far between. But when I have to consciously realign the speaker every one to three paragraphs the effect builds up, and I start wondering things like: (2) There is frequent assertion that no one can know (very reasonable,) so who are they talking to as they tell this story? Diaries? Maybe, but even then why have they (or someone) chopped their narratives up and shared it?

Again, I don't usually sweat these details in a first-person narrative, but the high-speed back-and-forth speaker swapping and the repeated insistance on secrecy drove me to wonder.

Nevertheless, it was an exciting story, and an enjoyable one. Well done! Looking forward to an even-better next story!

O.F.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Came three times

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Looking forward to reading more from Ms. 10/10

Very interesting.

Looking forward to reading more of Ms. 10/10's sexual awakening.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Mother fucker

Moms are the best fuck I love pulling her hair while fucking her pussy hard listen to her moan and groan while my cock slides in and out my birth canal fucking her good and she looks over shoulder and says fuck me son fuck your slut mother good cuz I love your cock in my wet pussy fuck your mother good baby I'm feeling my hot come come down my cock and splash in her pussy then she turns around and sucks my cock clean that sucks me hard then tells me to fuck her in the ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Probably.

One of the best he said, she said, stories here. 5 star. TY.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
To Fuck My Son or Not

I like the way you paired your story by giving that 1st Person effect to both characters, giving it a wholesome appeal to us. I intended to give you a --4--but a slip of the hand made it a --3--. It was erotic, sensual, challenging and all the feelings that surrounds mom's moral objectives, until her ex-husband appeared at the door. That, was the blossoming of her desires to give in more and want to fuck her son. I await another Chapter when they get more comfortable, relax some rules and fuck like the sex starved denied animal that she is. I love the way you compose, have been since I read one of your other stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I love your pussy mom

You are so hot mom, and you feel so fucking good. I love hearing you moan as I'm fucking your tight pussy. Hearing you sound like I remember from when I was in my teens makes me fuck you even harder.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A very touching and lovely story.

I would love it to be true and I would love to know his Mom. This is so well written that it got right inside me. How can I get my Mom as interested as this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Bravo

Your story and writing style are superb. Two thumbs up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Could have been a lot more erotic if he licked her cli and she sucked his cock and came in her moth but all in all Avery well written story a4 from me but coul easily been a7 if it had been more erotic if she goes on the pill and he empties his balls inside her. Great writing potential. Olso liked the way your eased into there relationship . Slowly breaking down the taboo barriers. And letting the primal instincts Take over. On other story where they get more primal written in the same context as this story .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

from one pov wd be better but sure ok ig

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i want to eat a guys cum out of his mom's pussy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I don't understand why a woman would ask her lover not to talk. Why doesn't she ask him not to kiss her. And while she there asks him not to lick on her pussy.

My older sister and I have been lovers since high school. I was in my freshmen year and she a senior. As it turned out she was a virgin. But sex involves so many factors beside a man sliding his cock in and out of some warm, wet pussy. There is the visional. Looking at her beautiful curves. Her luscious breast. Her long legs. Her puffing pussy lips. The smell. The smell of her mouth. The smell of her pussy. The smell of both of your juices mixed together after you both cum together. The taste. The taste of her sweet mouth. The taste of her virgin pussy. The taste of both of your juices after the two of your climates together. The touch. When she cups your ball in her hand and gently rolls them in her warm hand. Touching her clit and finger fucking her sweet hole. The sound. The sound of her moans and sighs. The sound of her squirting, slurping pussy. That can't be faked.

So NO TALKING wouldn't work for me.

My sister and I moved to Mexico and started a new life there. She has given me four beautiful children. And what is odd is that of all the incestual genres I'm a big fan of the mother/son relationships.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53about 1 year ago

Read like a movie script; too dry. Didn't feel any emotion from mom.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I fucked my friends dad it was a day to remember Jack had a 14 inch cock and fucked me the whole weekend and took me to a hotel and left the curtains open for all to see after he fucked both my mouth and ass and filled both he asked me if I would fuck a couple of his friends it will make him happy he said and I wanted him to be happy next thing he leaves and comes back with a group of 8 guys I asked him that he said a couple not thr hole team but he said that I could just blow some of them while the others fucked my ass well I was tied my head over the end of the bed and fucked over and over savagely rough thay fucked my throat and I mean this one cock felt like it was in my belly it was bigger than Jack's 18 easy and it's head was like a base ball bat he fucked my ass intill he pulled out and fuckin shoved it all thay down my throat and I could not breath ifelt him shoot his cum all down my throat it was sợ much and I passed out and he filled my mouth it was puddling on.my neck when I woke up he was pulling it out of my throat thay told jack that was the best whore that thay ever paid that much money for and one of them told Jack that he would by me from him well Jack said after I fuck this little cross dressing whore cum slut first you can have the whore and take her out of the country this he she will make us all alow of money we will give he some hot drugs to keep the whore sucking for us I was so out of it I wanted more cocks and cum thay pulled my hair and cut it off and tore my cloths to look more slutty and tied my hands gaged me and threw me in the trunk and drove away iam now whoring in mexico to 50 or 60 cocks each Dax and night and drugged out I have cum running down my legs ok that's it

OseekerOseeker12 months ago

This is a better taboo story than most I've found on this website.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

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OseekerOseekerabout 2 months ago

I enjoyed the 'back & forth' thoughts of mother & son.

But women always seem to put on the brakes, & then it got to 'rules' for the encounter.

4 stars from me. Coulda been a bit more arousing.

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