All Comments on 'Friends and Foes Ch. 11'

Love the plot development. You are a great writer.

This story is briliantly done...You are an amazing writer. You caught me by surprise, Adam's mother was the furthest from my mind. I was thinkig more along the line of the grandmother.

However this is an excellent turn of event. I really love this and all ur postings so far...Hope we will see regular pieces from u.

Fabulous and amazing writing

Well I just love this story. Don't take long in writing the next chapter.

I cant believe I was right on both accounts!:-o Woohoo! Didnt imagine them to be twins though but it makes more sense. Brilliant stuff as always. Cant sing your praises enough. Twas a fun read. Enjoyed it immensely and I cant wait for the finale... Cat

Figured out the brother/sister thing fairly early on, but I thought the grandmother was the baddie. Makes MUCH more sense that it's the mom.

I too figured out the bro/sis thing... and also thought it was the grandmother, whom was behind the kidnapping lol made me raise an eyebrow as I found out it was the mother. she was such the obvious choice, guess thats why I didn't even consider her. haha your an amazing writer and I love this story!!!

Great chapter! I know I am going to like the ending. It's sort of fun to be HOOKED!