by JugheadJane
This is the first anal story I've read and a really enjoyable one at that. I like the ups and downs between the characters and this contributes to a more intense final scene. I also enjoy the communication between Alice and Shane during their intimate moments.
For example:
"Just tell me to stop at any point if I hurt you," he whispered gently in her ear.
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"Keep going," she urged him. "Don't stop."
The care and consideration is sweet and makes for some hot sex.
Fantastic story! I love these... best one I've read in a long time!
This was hot! Really hot! How about a little prostate massage action where she makes him her bitch?
This is the kind of story I like: the kind with actual, well-developed characters, and not just sexy constructs who fuck because the plot demands it. What you've got here is romantic, believable, and erotic. Excellent work!