by SylentWriter
Both 1 & 2 held my interest from start to finish. You're able to hook the reader in the first few paragraphs I couldn't wait to scroll down Thanks for great stories, at times I felt like I was Reed. Write more or continue to part 3!!
When your tired mentally, They're someone loving you and been watching he even know your writing things like this.. God loves you, Christ arms are wide open mentally too
i would tie the bitch to the bed and me and my husband would take turns licking her cunt 'til she passed out
That was the word that came to mind for this comment and during the story. Even though there seemed to be too many characters, the sensational writing would bring me around to understand them!