All Comments on 'Friends Come First'

Cute story!

Loved how it took a while, but the alcohol haze finally lifted just enough for them. Got to wonder about Emily was a red head or a strawberry blond? She was described as both on her entry. Good start, hope the next chapter is as good.

that was so much FUN

Amusing!

R.S.

Jajajaja

I wonder if Emily is the one who clued Mike in.

Took their alcohol soaked brains long enough 😁

Great twist.

I really wish this guy was still writing.

Very good, nicely put together and lead us into a trap at the end, great

Wonder what Mike will do when he realizes that Emily knew all about it.

Wonderfully predictable.

I was thinking this could be a nice long story tan cut short with alot of laughing at the end great turn around five

just too funny

Excellent little piece

A delightful little tale. Full marks.

A sweet little mini saga.

Can't stop chuckling.... So well done with so few words. A masterpiece.

Smart scene! That was fun. I wouldn't trust any of those girls out of my sight, but it was fun.

Interesting lead up, but where is it going hmmmmmmmmmmmmm?

Yes! The Twist. And a great one it is.

LMFFAO!

Sorry girls, I think Emily has outmanoeuvred you for good! On a sidenote: Where were those kind of girls, who'd do every Tom, Harry and their dicks in a heartbeat, when I was young, virile and single? Ah well, never mind...

Better hurry, girlfriends. Funny story.

Thank you!

Hilarious. Loved it

Really great little story, but still, someone has to nitpick an insignificant editorial mistake just to show how smart they are.

Nice story. The phrase is "beck and call," not "beckon call."

None of the women in the story are wife material. They are too much into their slut lifestyle. If they want to get married, they need to act like a wife should. I'm not saying to stay a virgin, but they shouldn't be sleeping around either.

Yes

That was awesome. Early bird catches the dick

A great flash story. This guy can write anything.

Comments smart beautiful and head start

Told Charlton Heston at the beginning of the chariot race "Just stay in the chariot Chuck, I guarantee you'll win the damned race." Nothing like giving the competition a heads up, and a head start. And they're off... Signed: BTW

Very nice indeed. I did not see that one coming. Thanks for a good laugh, Vulcez.

hilarious.

Emily is smart, as well as beautiful. She's got a head start.

Emily probably knows all about Jake's big cock. She's likely the one who hooked Vicky up with Jake and then arranged to have "poor Mike" informed that Vicky was hooked on getting fucked by 'Big Jake'. I'd say that Vicky and Mike are history and Emily is already riding the inside rail to the altar. Jake will get all the pussy he wants from Emily and Emily will continue getting all the cock she wants from Jake but she'll also have a nice new home, a successful husband and respectability. Conniving Cunts. Men are all for one. Women are all for them-self.

Cleverly written story. 5 stars.

Emily probably gave Mike a heads up about Vicky so she could get him...lol

Emily's so "sweet," yet she knows about, and I presume approves of, Vicky's "indiscretions?"

LOL, the ending raised this an entire star for me!

Great twist at the end. Go Emily! And where can I meet her??? Made me smile and chuckle. Still smiling....

Loved it!!!

eat it dear annony

Thanks for the offering.

English is obviously not your native language or you would easily recognize that the author was writing American English. If you took the trouble to read the author's biography, you would see that he's from Colorado.

How does he 'Write like a brit'? Do you mean he writes in English? What a keen eye you have! I missed that, upon my first reading! He does indeed write using the English language, unlike your well thought out, and insightful gibberish.

I also agree that Anonymous is a p***k but then I would, being a Brit.

and dear annony your the part that ran down your daddy's leg

This story was great!

The jerk writes like a Brit. 1* !!

made me smile , & thats hard to do right now ,

so i thank the author for a good read .

This has just enough to tell the story so well. *****

I guess the other three were just a little buzzed from their head-start on the drinking so it took them long enough to give Emily a head-start on Mike.

Thanks for the laugh. Entertaining story

The surprise ending got me. I didn't see it coming.

A very nice story with hummer.

I didn´t expect anything else . Fabulous!

5 Stars for a short but Humorous piece! Seems like a good variant on 'Sex and the City' ! Dan

An excellent tale! Hilarious. Thanks.

First served, first come!

Awesome story!

Thx

love it.

Funny, clever, remarkably true. Emily is a sly one. Positioning herself like that. Well done author!

Thanks for the smile !

Funny and sad is this tale.

What we actually have here are the future cheating wives of America.

FUCK "UM

I liked it muchly.

A great story with the perfect realization at the end! Well written and strong premise.

Thank you.

Clear as crystal to me well ahead of the ladies lol -

Perfect set up and one of them was going to Mike's that night no matter what - heh

More please

What the fuck... What happened and where was I?

Good twist-in-the-tail(tale) plot

The way the other Girls took so long to figure out their friend was Chasing the "Prize" lol.

and hope its beneficial to all. TK U MLJ LV NV

Please don't try to copy most everyone else on this site. Your stories are all the better for not having to slog through explicit scenes that don't really contribute to the plot. Leaving a place for the imagination is much more powerful than mere description. If all people want is graphic sex scenes, let them read in the erotic couplings section. Signed -Surreptitious

Didn't see that twist coming. Hope you'll come with more stories.

Regards, J [drazvich(at)live(dot)com]

More please, more more more.

Never saw that twist at the end. And the girls bailing out of the bar like a fire house just made me laugh. First in first served. Thanks for the laugh. Jim

That's funny stuff right there!

I had to read this again. Keep the stories coming. Thank you.

very entertaining. Thanks!

I'm now giggling

just goes to show friendship only goes so far.....

teehee... snicker... snort... funny...

with the unexpected twist at the end. More about Emily and Mike please.

Thanks for your hard work.

Woodmanone

Much too short but the ending was surprising.

Suckered me right to the end! nice job

I seen the ending coming, but it didn't making it any less funny. Nice story. And please, I'd really like to see a humorous sequel showing Vicky's reaction to Emily and Mike hooking up.

Didn’t see the ending at all … love it!

Great little story, didn't see the end coming until it got there. No sex, so what!

A delightful little twist and those other girls are already "also-rans" before they even knew the race had started. Well done.

...as original as Scorpio,who tends to fawn these days said. And Harry didn't see this coming?

Enjoyed the twist

Great little story with a twist I did not see coming at all!

I liked it a lot. I hope that Emily really does console MIke and help him feel better. Thanks for the story.

Although I had figured it out way before the end, it was still very funny to read, especially the reactions of the other girls. A funny short story, very nice.

you are rapidly becoming one of my favorite writers. This went off in a direction I did NOT see...

Superbly plotted and written!

Great story ! I was not sure about it when I started reading , thinking it was going to be a typical married woman bar seduction story < but you proved me wrong , Good Job !!!!! keep the stories coming .

An amazing tale constructed to perfection and with the sinister mind I admire! Thank you!

Emily, girl, you didnt lose a moment. Great short story. a great guy is a rare find. and most are already taken.

Just right length. No real need for sex scenes in this one. Nice job.