All Comments on 'Friends Locking Friends'

This was well written and very well thought out. I sincerely hope that you do not stop here, this is a story that begs for.multiple installments. There are many many ways you can go here and I am looking forward to more.

Wow.. Great start!

This is a great story and I'm highly looking forward to the next installment. There are so many different ways to take it, and I'm excited to see where you take it.

Enjoyed. I am surprised there are not more hints about how much Kara's nudity is bothering Michael. Look forward to next installment. Roe

Another vote for more instalments, this is a very promising start. Plenty of detail without being so much that you're bored to death before anything happens, a nice built up back story, and it doesn't feel rushed as many of these things can turn out.

Looking forward to hopefully the next part.

Good start, I ll be looking forward to see how this one develops

Ty

Your stories are all great, but they also all feel like they're just beginning; an introduction of plot that stop just short of the conflict and tension that would make them complete. I definitely urge you to expand on them!

Please continue ?

Waiting for part 2