All Comments on 'Friends, Sexcapades and Love Affairs Ch. 13'

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1moeannie1moeannieover 3 years ago

I'm not enjoying this story as much. The premise was interesting but now, not so much. It's too long between submissions and not enough detail. One more chapter.

BaladeerBaladeerover 3 years ago
so good

Great story, good writing and character development. I hope to see Jared be strong and make smart decisions going forward though.

Cannot wait for more, and soon.

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyabout 3 years ago

Chris is a massive prolapsed asshole, no offense to people who like that sort of thing. My god! What's next for Jared then. And I'd hate for Jared to move work just for it to not work out with Ryan, I feel like he likes Ryan more than Ryan likes him. They're both men but I'm still adamant Ryan should be showing more initiative

Edward and Adrian. Adrian totally has the hots for Edward but we've been knew that and Edward feels it too, he just likes complicating things

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