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All Comments on '"Friends" with Benefits'

by WyltEmrys

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chick2206chick2206about 2 years ago

Very well written though unsure why it is in the romance section. Erotic couplings is more likely home to this story. It was hot though. Seduction was on point

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But needed a lot more teasing. His cock and balls with her hands. Dialog about how it felt. To him. To her.

Her breasts and nipples with his hands. Then his mouth.

Her pussy needed extended touching, fingering, and playing with. Perhaps an orgasm for her before he ued his lips and tongue.

Given her DD's, why no titty-fucking?

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very well done! Build up was great. Climax was even better.

Hope this one gets a second chapter😎.

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Long-time reader, recently turned author. Available for editing as well, if anyone needs assistance with their own stories. I can be found here & there on the 'Net, usually under this profile name, so if we cross paths, say "Hi!"