All Comments on 'Frigate Cove Ch. 13-14'

Waitin' to see what you come up with next?

I'm glad to read all your recent stories!

Boyd Percy

Loved the story the characters and the plot. Enjoyed that while on tour he was not tempted to me it showed his true love. The only constructive comment would be that I liked the chapter format but wish the individual posts where a bit longer. That is strictly personal preference your story made me want to wait for the next installment.

I expected Brad to have a bigger influence on the story. You do not make the life of an

author sound like a bed of roses.

It's nice to read a romantic love story.

Don't have the word to express how much I enjoy your work. Thank you so very much for your efforts to entertain.

Thanks for the Great story with an ending all 5's

Agree to pay the ex-fiancee whatever amount, but in return she would have to return the ring. There is no way that greedy witch went 5 years without selling that ring!!!!! It was worth some cash value, she would have cashed it in.

Once the ring proved to be not the same one, oops, there goes the claim of marriage.

Great read.

thanks.

First this is a very good enjoyable story.

I kept wondering why he didn’t turn a private investigator loose on the ex-girlfriend to find out what she had done since they broke up.

Switching between timeframes within the framework of a story is one of the more difficult literature tricks. Those within Frigate Cove were as well done as I’ve ever encountered. The breaks both back and forward were seamless in maintaining continuity.

I have been fortunate to find a few outstanding authors here on Literotica and tend to start at the “A”s for their postings and read straight through their collected works. I’m up the Fs of coaster2 and will happily continue through his works.

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Thanks,

Jon

Am moving on to more from this great writer. Bravos for an enjoyable read.

Loved this story. If only love was that easy! One thing with Andrea though is why did he pay her off? Even if it ended up costing him as much in legal fees to fight it, surely it would be better paying that money to his friend than to the gold digging bitch. I would of rather payed double to the lawyer to make sure she never got anything. But anyway, 5 stars. I look forward to checking out your other stories.

as usal left hanging on whether there was a baby girl or boy born.

Great story, but I think that Cam should have been able to kick Andrea to the curb with her getting nothing. Also

it was kind of a stretch to leave a 6 year old alone and have him fend for himself. Otherwise this was a great read and deserves 5 stars

chur m8 awsum story

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Good series, but I was a bit disappointed that the final just sort of ended suddenly. At least including an epilog would have been better.

Just finished series. Very good as usual

Great story telling and thoroughly enjoyed the read. Only criticism is that the ending was a bit weak. Just kinda petered out I thought. Still rated it 5stars..... :-)

Tbh the story as a whole is weak, character development is very poor and the plotline doesn’t really reach out and grab you, added to which the ridiculous short chapter format actively puts readers off.

Please write personalities that we can mentally visualise, that are real, height, build, mannerisms etc, then endear them to us, not the blurred, milk toast versions in this story. 3 stars, because it’s very average.

In terms of the series, I liked it overall. The first couple chapters were excellent. Very engaging. However, the last couple almost seemed like an epilog. The wedding and guests were gone in the blink of an eye. I felt like I skipped some pages and missed something. There were a lot of opportunities to excite the story. Perhaps Brad comes along and causes disruption. Maybe one of the younger wedding guests gets list on the island. How about Cam's Tour Assistant hits on him? 1st third of series Great!, Middle part less so and last third mostly died on the vine!

great story, mostly free of the annoying typos seen in other Lit works. Some info given that left was unused. "Francis is good at reading people." No example given, author not given lesson to practice for when it becomes important later, because later never comes. Author practically gives road map to his home address when privacy was his prior custom- and that was BEFORE he became wealthy and famous. Now it's public knowledge, as well as his vacation destination. Annoying paparatzy are a near certainty. Although gold digger Andrea and Brad the Bastard (nice name for a pirate, that) seem to have been neutralized as a threat, there are always others waiting in the wings. John Hinkley's obsession with actress Jody Foster caused him to murder John Lennon. Kidnapping for profit is also a possibility, although the RCMP and neighboring FBI have made that a poor percentage play. There's always the threat of terrorism, too...

Anon56

Love this story. You paint pictures with words it is a great talent to be able to do that. Thanks

What about some comeuppance for the bitch Andrea! She deserved shit!!!

Wedding was over in a flash - very underdeveloped!!!

Unnecessary time spent on Andrea!!!

Ended too quick

Enjoyed the series, though this last one fell a bit short.