All Comments on 'From Bathing Suit to Lawsuit'

Very well written. The husband is a wimp but what can you do. You capture the disease that is North American society perfectly. "It is not my fault I'm a slut. I'll sue" And to bad it is US as the wimp husband is going to pay for not throwing this slut to the curb as fast as possible. Now he is paying for her to fuck around on him. Soon when he finds out what she is doing and finally gets a divorce. She will take him for half of everything plus child support plus alimony as this worthless slut doesn't even have a job. And no Blowjobs don't count. There is a lesson to be learned for all the cuck idiots out there. Once a slut always a slut, it's not about what you want she's using you fool. I have no pity for the husband in this story, he is going to get just what he deserves for being a wimp. Good portrayal of cheating and how the slut rationalizes the outcome. And that makes a distasteful story a good story.

A deluded wife who for some strange reason thought sucking someones dick wasn't cheating. Then you have the stoic husband who stands by the wife, why I have no idea. Then to top it all she goes out and proves to every body that she is a SLUT and a drunken slut at that. Sorry I feel nothing for anybody in this story. The wife is a fool the husband is a fool. And if the wife gets anything from the court or the company she worked for then they are both fools.

Another attempt at writing a story - go shovel some snow or do something usefull. Your story reads lie a wanted add in a small town paper

Not badly written, just don't see the point. Didn't find it erotic just sad and distastefull. Next time find better people to writs about, nobody cares what happens to these.

Somewhere in the middle of this thing the lines began to blur. Didn't quite bring it together.

This story reminds me of the one journalist in the home of the man whose wife disappeared wearing just a towel when she was supposed to be reporting on him. Anyone with brains knows journalist, no matter what media, have as much morals and ethics as lawyers.

Story had an interesting premise to start that never really went anywhere. I enjoyed the sex scenes very much, but the discredited news person theme seemed like a disjointed interjection throughout the story culminating in an unneeded moral at the end.

I think this story has potential if you develop it a bit more. I enjoy your writing and look forward to more.

This "story" was really a road less travelled...more like a road not travelled at all. MapQuest could not have made sense of it. Other than a jerk-off narrative, I am not sure what the purpose of the "story" was.<p>

It was a description of a lot of sexual acts which were not very erotic. There are only so many ways to describe the limited number of sexual acts available to even the most promiscuous of people, and it takes some skill, and an interesting story, to make these overused descriptions sound erotic. The writer does not seem to have that skill.<p>

This was an obvious attempt to capitalize on a relatively recent news reporting scandal and the attempt went nowhere.

Mommy should have beaten the hell out of you when you saw her, maybe then you would not write crap like this

Truth is not a defense for libel or slander. A statement can be totally true and still be subject in the courts. What the principle rests on is INTENT (exclusive of major news figures who have a weaken defense because of their highly public status). Intent in that you mean for the action (libel or slander) to hurt or harm and do so for that purpose.

The wife was an open whore and deserved whatever she got.

There is nothing erotic or arousing to the 99.9% when a sickly wimp writer writes about braindead cucks and their whores.<P>

Beat it about and it just won't ever be worth anyone's time because it paints a absurdly sick subhuman situation that offends and insults anyone who can read above the 5th grade level.<P>

Yet this and other so called writers seem so addicted to helpless self cucksters and their wifely motherly whores - so as to rarely see the lite before they waste tons of their time and ours.<P>

The real shame is the talent wasted by sicko's with talent like this addicto. I guess someone has to be on the bottom of the rancid cum pit but to be there by choice is a sad sad self helpless braindead wasted sick person. Quite often the writers name signals their one handed I.Q. - never so true as in this case.<P>

Constructively - get some help - then come back and entertain the masses with your talent.

She is single, he is single, and he is arranging her rape. What's the point?

I often wondered what happened to people who got fired from the big M or BK - now I know, they try a new career move as writers

This is bad. I come here to be entertained and read all stories, no matter which category but at least I expect some plot, some sex and maybe some humor but this belongs in a class of it's own for some of the worst writing. Turd category maybe?

As a minor contributor to this site, I like your writing. Always have and always will. Your skill lies in your rousing and arousing description of sex. Mindblowingly evocative at times. Keep going!

I totally disagree with the denigrating comments left by these geniuses. I read for pleasure. So should they. If you do not get pleasure or worse you already know you will not get pleasure, then stop reading or do not start to read. Move on, there is a lot of great stuff on this site.

But I guess these are people who get pleasure from pulling other people down. Sad commentary on life - most of our problems stem from negative people.

Bad & boring with about as much sex appeal as a wet dish rag, no scratch that, even a dry dish rag is more exciting than this

I like your writing style. I hope you continue with this story.

Thanks.

Crap remains crap no matter how well written

Great story! Hope there is a part 2 with the doorman and maybe more of his friends and our favorite reporter?

Why do they keep reading your stories if they dont like

Two new characters, and your writing as good as ever.

I loved it and am looking forward to your next submission as someone else suggested how about what happens with the doorman? Or maybe a prequel with the events before the start of the story

Why do they keep reading your stories if they dont like

Two new characters, and your writing as good as ever.

I loved it and am looking forward to your next submission as someone else suggested how about what happens with the doorman? Or maybe a prequel with the events before the start of the story

Why do they keep reading your stories if they dont like

Two new characters, and your writing as good as ever.

I loved it and am looking forward to your next submission as someone else suggested how about what happens with the doorman? Or maybe a prequel with the events before the start of the story

Why do they keep reading your stories if they dont like

Two new characters, and your writing as good as ever.

I loved it and am looking forward to your next submission as someone else suggested how about what happens with the doorman? Or maybe a prequel with the events before the start of the story

Why do they keep reading your stories if they dont like

Two new characters, and your writing as good as ever.

I loved it and am looking forward to your next submission as someone else suggested how about what happens with the doorman? Or maybe a prequel with the events before the start of the story

Great beginning, great. Don't leave us hanging re: doorman Willy.

Says it all.

says it all

I don't get the point of this story. It makes no sense.

First, did she suck the first guy off to get the story or was she just having an affair with him. The author did not give us any thoughts on that. If it was just to get a story, was she really that stupid? All he had to have was a hidden camera and he would have owned her ass.

Then, what is up with a husband who did not want to ask her what the hell she was doing and whether it was common for her to do. He had money. No PI put in play or anything. He just keeps living with the bitch.

So now, she says she is married, but the husband had legal separation papers filed. Who the hell maintains a legal separation for years? Why not divorce? What is the point of them staying married? I cannot even get upset about her cheating. Cheating on what, they have no marriage. I do NOT understand.

As I said, this story makes no sense. I might have actually liked the sex scenes if it had just been an older broad hooking up with a young guy at the pool. But all the other crap was just too distracting.

While I usually enjoy your stories, this one never built up any kind of feeling for Annie and when I got to the end I just wondered "Huh"? Perhaps the next story.......

Well, you nailed that one.

Unfortunately, I didn't care about ANYONE in your story...

Seems you'd have wanted that... Unless you really didn't want me to care about ANYONE... In which case you definitely nailed that one too...

Another illiterate WHORE posting cuck shit.

of current news reporting, TK U MLJ LV NV

Chevrolet Impalas were not made in 1989

Not quite sure what to think I this one. Open ended, she.needed to burn again.

BORRRINGGGG

Samson

This really didn’t go anywhere. What did the husband do about her cheating and we should have seen her suffer in some way.

Sloppy with no imagination or skill at telling stories. NO STARS is a valid score!

The first page was good, but the next two were just on long juvenile fuck fest. Could have been good . but wasn't.

The New York Times kept Ali Watkins, after it was revealed that Miss Watkins, 34, had been sleeping with her 57 year old married source for inside information on the Senate.

1 star

I hated the story, but gave it four stars for its above-average writing style and use of vocabulary. The writer has the ability to paint a picture concisely. Adjectives were effective, but slightly overused: everyone's asshole is crinkly. "Crinkly" made me think of thick cellophane wrapping paper. The plot was good and the story was structured well. I like how the story began with the errant reporter in the tree, and I enjoyed the description of the tree and the setting; it painted a picture. I like how the perspective changed. Through no fault of the author I simply didn't enjoy the story for whatever reason, but it does seem to be well-written. Honestly, I skipped over all the sex on pages 2 and 3. Now that I've written my comment I've gone through and looked at the previous comments. I wouldn't have called it a boring story, but it is true that I felt bored while reading it. I felt like it was a bit of a slog. Perhaps it was just too slow; I don't know. It's also true that I did not feel any empathy for Annie, so perhaps that is what was lacking; I really didn't care about her or have any desire to know what happened next to her. I disagree that this was a cuck story; yes her husband was cucked, but we were never really introduced to him and so felt no empathy for him; he may as well not even have been there. I disagree that the writer has "no writing skills"; I think the writing is above-average.

Only stupid people thinks that cheating once is a mistake