All Comments on 'From Billy Bob to William, Sweet'

Short, cute and well written. Nice Valentine season fare.

A very enjoyable read some issues making it feel dinner on places as it didn't for right but still very good. Abit short for my liking would definitely suite a continuation.

Over way to quick. A little follow up would be appreciated!

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Nice Valentine's toss-off.

But the fibula is the small bone in the lower leg, not anywhere near the shoulder. Even a slapstick orthopod wouldn't say _that!_

this is a good start, but the story is incomplete. when you post the next chapter, I'll come back and give you a rating on this one.

A little abbeviated and therefore a rush but a lot of detail included. Follow up is needed.

5 from me.

Nice story, Mr. 0418. Write another please, Randi.

If you don't write at least one more chapter I WILL find you! Seriously, this is a great start to an even greater story. I beg you to continue.

you need more chapters, very nice

I agree with other posts. This is a very good start to what could be a great story. Please don’t stop now.

Nothing like a super hot woman to take your mind off your cheating slut ex-girlfriend!!!

Could really be turned into a series and should be as it was a funny and sweet story keep them coming.

Very cute 5 star story but to echo others its begging for a follow-up if not a whole series. Not enough sweet stories.

Why did you name the second girl Rebecca? Becky is a short form for Rebecca! You are unnecessarily complicating the story! The story was good but too short.

Now that was a fun little story. You wrapped it all up quite well.

Good one.

Sweet.

A welcome respite from the sour offerings hereabouts. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thank you.

My first story of yours. Will not be the last. I like your nice tight style with words

A great story, I really like it very much. Will there be a sequel?

Great tight valentine story.

This story is cute, nice, good-hearted, and definitely not the kind I usually read and I sure like it. A 5 star if ever I've read one!

Yeah, sweeet. 5⭐️s.

Cute enjoyable story. Fun, light touch with dialogue, plot.

Yes, it's sequel time!

Good story, but too short

good one

Seemed incomplete. And fibula is a bone in thr lower leg, not the arm.

I think chopinesque said it as well or better than I could.

Wouldn't it be great if every cheating girlfriend got dumped like this in the real world

A nice, short story that could have been fleshed out some. Still, five stars, even though you had a bone that hides behind the shin bone, the tibia, in the upper arm.

JPB NOT BOB

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