All Comments on 'From Fire to Frying Pan'

This story is about a boy who has still not seen the eroticism around and is trying to rate himselves by the myths that have deeply framed his mind.

OK,

I am going to make a guess here that English is only a second language for the writer. The story was really incomprehensible. It jumped from scene to scene without really telling any story and often just didn't make sense. Sorry, I don't normally leave negative feedback but this was brutal.