All Comments on 'From Friends to Lovers Ch. 22'

Pick a damn category and stick to it! Few LW readers are going to go back and read 21 chapters in categories that they don't want to read. If you can't decide, just put it in Novels and tag each chapter.

Thanks for the feedback - part of my challenge to myself in writing this (apart from just having fun) was to find a storyline that could have chapters in most (not all!) Lit categories, to see if I could do it. I guess different readers will find that to their taste or not... I know the story's taken some veering turns but what the heck.

That's not very kind :). There's a difference between not having a good grasp of language (I wouldn't claim my grammar is perfect) and trying to bend rules creatively. Ever read e e cummings? He doesn't seem to understand punctuation, capital letters, lol.

Nothing I read here would ever make me chase down 21 previous chapters anywhere.