All Comments on 'From My Mom to My Co-Wife Pt. 01'

by Soggysquash7

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A very good beginning can’t wait to read more.

HoltarenHoltarenover 3 years ago

Yummy. Me likes. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start!

Looking great, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Please write the next part soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I (Nancy) can only be 100% sure of the things I personally witnessed. The rest are recreated from my mom Jan's and husband Mike's recounting. I also cannot be sure of they "felt" at any moment, only what I saw or was told later."

I haven't read the story yet, but I have to give you props for finding a way of dealing with 1st person POV somehow knowing what happened when the narrator isn't there. Nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hmmm

Wishing you had made them a young couple; maybe like 20. Then Jan could be like 38. Then both women would be child-bearing age!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

nice premise but unfinished.... please write completed stories. you will get much higher ratings if you do.

firefox2020firefox2020over 3 years ago

great! liked the concept .. looking forward ...

csltcsltover 3 years ago
Great Start!

Can't wait or the next Part.

Soggysquash7Soggysquash7over 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

More to come for sure!

JaceyTreyJaceyTreyover 3 years ago

I cautiously optimistic. This Dom behavior skirts real close to duchebaggery. Not a criticism. Just hoping that you don't take us down a road of no-holds-barred weird ass whatever. Mom-in-law/daughter co-wives is pretty kinky already; I'm hoping you don't add cousins and uncles or nephews and grandparents. Some stuff gets pretty friggin weird in this category, and you've a premise I've not seen thus far...please don't derail it by twisting the story just to see how far you can go. Please. This has a real promising plot. For a REAL story, not just a mastabatory aid. Fingers crossed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
"nice premise but unfinished.... please write completed stories."

Another one who can't see the chapter number.

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