by Soggysquash7
I haven't read the story yet, but I have to give you props for finding a way of dealing with 1st person POV somehow knowing what happened when the narrator isn't there. Nice.
Wishing you had made them a young couple; maybe like 20. Then Jan could be like 38. Then both women would be child-bearing age!
nice premise but unfinished.... please write completed stories. you will get much higher ratings if you do.
I cautiously optimistic. This Dom behavior skirts real close to duchebaggery. Not a criticism. Just hoping that you don't take us down a road of no-holds-barred weird ass whatever. Mom-in-law/daughter co-wives is pretty kinky already; I'm hoping you don't add cousins and uncles or nephews and grandparents. Some stuff gets pretty friggin weird in this category, and you've a premise I've not seen thus far...please don't derail it by twisting the story just to see how far you can go. Please. This has a real promising plot. For a REAL story, not just a mastabatory aid. Fingers crossed.
Another one who can't see the chapter number.